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bananatricky

Sitting on the edge with my Kindle

I am a voarcious reader who resents the time she spends sleeping and working as it leaves less time for my kindle

Currently reading

American Gods
Neil Gaiman
The Dream Hunter
Sherrilyn Kenyon
Dragonswan
Sherrilyn Kenyon
Taking Chase
Lauren Dane
Don't Let Go
Marliss Melton
Bait
Annie Nicholas
Second Grave on the Left
Darynda Jones
Last Man Standing
Cindy Gerard
One for the Wicked
Karina Cooper
Kill Shot
Liliana Hart
The First Alpha - K.A.  Taylor Urgh I kept at it but at 60% I pulled the plug when I came across this horror:

Cassie chewed her lower lip and clutched handfuls of hay between her fingers as Adam slid slowly forward, spreading her tightness with his enormous member. She gasped with surprise as her dripping wet lips spread smoothly open to allow him to enter, shocked at how hard and hot he felt inside her. I was sitting on a commuter train when I read that - the shame!

Adam changes his name to Robert at one point.

The book has spelling mistakes and bad grammar. It's a pity because I kind of liked the story with Adam being THE Adam and her mother's scheming but it was badly written. Who in their right minds refers to a man's phallus and/or member? I mean really?