Urgh I kept at it but at 60% I pulled the plug when I came across this horror:Cassie chewed her lower lip and clutched handfuls of hay between her fingers as Adam slid slowly forward, spreading her tightness with his enormous member. She gasped with surprise as her dripping wet lips spread smoothly open to allow him to enter, shocked at how hard and hot he felt inside her.
I was sitting on a commuter train when I read that - the shame!
Adam changes his name to Robert at one point.
The book has spelling mistakes and bad grammar. It's a pity because I kind of liked the story with Adam being THE Adam and her mother's scheming but it was badly written. Who in their right minds refers to a man's phallus and/or member? I mean really?